假定你是高中生李華，對(duì)西方文化非常感興趣，想在暑期去英國旅游。請(qǐng)你給你的英國網(wǎng)友戴維（David）發(fā)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1. 旅游目的；2. 旅游計(jì)劃；3. 需要的幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Dear David,

I have been expecting to travel to the UK so that I can experience English culture personally. I am writing to ask for some advice.

My parents and I plan to travel to the UK during the summer holidays. We are to spend a week in London. Since this is the first time that I have traveled abroad, I would like to know which places of interest are well worth visiting. Can you offer me some advice and recommend some tourist attractions to me?

I would appreciate it if you could write back to me soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇材料類作文，假定是高中生李華，對(duì)西方文化非常感興趣，想在暑期去英國旅游。給英國網(wǎng)友戴維（David）發(fā)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：旅游目的；旅游計(jì)劃；需要的幫助。詞數(shù)100左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

文中第一段直接點(diǎn)題說明要點(diǎn)，并在最后加以說明發(fā)電子郵件的目的。第二段包含了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并在最后用問句形式點(diǎn)明“迫切需要幫助”緊扣主題。并在第三段適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，表示感謝。整篇文章從語法來看，沒犯語法錯(cuò)誤；從內(nèi)容上看簡潔明了，符合英文電子郵件的特點(diǎn)，讓人讀起朗朗上口，是一篇很值得借鑒的文章。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

范文使用了一些重要的語法知識(shí)：結(jié)果狀語從句so that I can experience English culture personally；賓語從句 which places of interest are well worth visiting；固定句型This is the …time that sb. have/has done sth.

范文注意使用了現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)等不同的時(shí)態(tài)來敘述不同的事情，對(duì)時(shí)態(tài)有較好的把握。

范文運(yùn)用一些亮點(diǎn)詞匯詞組如be well worth visiting、tourist attraction、appreciate等使作文內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)，表達(dá)更加生動(dòng)。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文

 

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