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題目：Things Making Life Happy

要點(diǎn)：1. 不同人有不同的幸福觀；

2. 我認(rèn)為身體健康是幸福；

3. 但是，只有身體健康是不夠的。

注意：1. 分三段書寫；2，詞數(shù)：100~120。

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Answer 1

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Things Making Life Happy

It’s believed that different people have different points of view on happiness. For instance, some people think that one is happy if one has many loyal friends and some people think that one enjoys one’s greatest happiness from one’s continuous success in one’s job.

How do I think about happiness? As far as I am concerned, to be healthy is one’s greatest happiness. As a proverb says, “A sound mind is in a sound body”. If one isn’t healthy, he will suffer both mentally and physically.

Health is a person’s happiness, but not wholeness. He ought to work for benefit of other people with the intelligence and health. Only by doing so can he be regarded as both a happy and a great person.

【解析】

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文是議論文，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。分三段闡述Things Making Life Happy。第一段：不同人有不同的幸福觀。用It’s believed that different people have different points of view on happiness.總領(lǐng)全文。用some people…，some people…。具體說(shuō)明不同的人有不同的幸福觀。第二段：我個(gè)人的幸福感。其中引用的一句諺語(yǔ)A sound mind is in a sound body是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。還有As far as I am concerned 等短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用。 第三段寫除了健康之外，還有聰慧和為他人著想。最后一句用倒裝句Only by doing so can he be regarded as both a happy and a great person.用得很不錯(cuò)。

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