Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter想來中國旅行，他寫信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何種交通工具旅行比較適宜。請你給他寫封回信，建議他乘坐高鐵。

建議理由：

1.便捷、準(zhǔn)點(diǎn)；

2.舒適、安全；

3.購票方便、價(jià)格適宜。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：中國高鐵 CRH (China Railway High-speed)；自助售票機(jī) self-service ticket machine

Dear Peter,

I’m expecting you to come to China. _________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter，

I’m expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which have been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.

It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to go. The CRH trains are spacious, comfortable and run at high speed. They arrive on schedule and guarantee the safety of travelers. It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable. It offers first-class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.

Yours,

Li Hua

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