Question

【題目】請改正下面短文中的錯誤。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉；

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I first learnt to write with English, I ran into many difficulties. The mainly problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into English. A teacher advised me keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it a lot and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

【答案】1.with-in

2.mainly-main

3. but-and

4. advised me 后加to

5. 去掉 should

6. talk—talking

7. me-myself

8. showed 后加it

9. reads—read

10. word - words

【解析】１.句意：用英語寫。ｉｎ　Ｅｎｇｌｉｓｈ用英語，故把ｗｉｔｈ―――ｉｎ。

２.形容詞修飾名詞，故把mainly-main。

３.句意：我總是用漢語想并努力把他們翻譯成英語。根據(jù)句意可知此處是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故把but-and。

４.固定搭配：ａｄｖｉｓｅ�。螅猓��。簦铩。洌铩。螅簦瑁�建議某人做某事，故在advised me 后加to 。

５.此處是并列的兩個表示過去的動作，should是贅語，應(yīng)去掉。

６.固定搭配：enjoy doing。故把talk—talking 。

７. 漢語“自己表達(dá)”用英語是express oneself。故把me-myself 。

８. “給某人看……”應(yīng)用show sth to sb。代詞it 放在showed和to 中間。故showed 后加it 。

９. 該文以過去時態(tài)為背景，所以reads應(yīng)改為read。

１０．不是一個人說，所以word應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。