【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處增加一個漏字符號（^）并在其下面寫出該加的詞

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在改詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in a play, that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I used to being quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encouraged me to do so. What they said had a deep influence of me. By now I changed greatly. In class, I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. Now I am delightful that I’m brave enough to overcome the difficulty in my heart. My experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.

【答案】

【解析】作者講述了自己從過去非常害怕在公共場合說話到有足夠的勇氣在內(nèi)心中克服這些困難的成長經(jīng)歷。

第一處：考查非謂語動詞。my name 與call之間是被動關系，所以用過去分詞，calling 改成called。

第二處：考查非限制性定語從句。指代整個主句內(nèi)容，且是非限制性定語從句，that不能引導非限制性定語從句，所以that改成which。

第三處：考查固定用法。我過去非常害怕在公共場合說話。used to do過去常常做某事，是固定用法，所以being改成be。

第四處：考查固定短語。in public是固定短語，所以去掉the。

第五處：考查固定用法。have a deep influence on / upon sb. 對某人有深刻的影響，是固定用法，所以of改成on / upon。

第六處：考查時態(tài)。由By now可知，表示過去發(fā)生的、持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的動作或狀態(tài)，用現(xiàn)在完成時，所以changed之前加have。

第七處：考查固定用法。句意：教室里，我經(jīng)常第一個站起來回答問題，即使我可能會犯一些錯誤。make some mistakes犯一些錯誤，是固定短語，所以take改成make。

第八處：考查形容詞。現(xiàn)在我很高興我有足夠的勇氣在內(nèi)心中克服這些困難。delightful意為“可愛的”，形容物；delighted意為“高興的”，所以delightful改成delighted。

第九處：考查連詞。we should not be afraid of losing face 與 only in this way can we make progresses. 之間是并列關系，所以but改成and。

第十處：考查固定用法。progress是抽象名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式，所以progresses改成 progress。

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