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在2008年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)上，中國(guó)著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員劉翔因腳傷退出比賽，引起人們的廣泛爭(zhēng)議。下面是騰訊網(wǎng)站的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查：

運(yùn)動(dòng)員受傷后，應(yīng)該堅(jiān)持還是應(yīng)該退出？

選項(xiàng)名稱	投票數(shù)	百分比		趨勢(shì)
應(yīng)該退出，健康比金牌重要	222292	34，77％	──────
運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)就是戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)，劉翔應(yīng)當(dāng)堅(jiān)持	123752	19．36％	───

請(qǐng)你結(jié)合上表，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

注意：    1．詞數(shù)100左右；  2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.

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Answer 1

In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.

According to a survey conducted by Tencent Website, about 34 percent of the people think an athlete should quit the race when injured since health is much more important than a gold medal. While nearly 20 percent of the citizens believe that an injured athlete should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. They regard the sport field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his or her country in spite of any difficulty.

In my opinion, it's a right choice for Liu Xiang to choose to quit the race. For one thing, nothing is more important than health and sports doesn't mean sacrificing one's health for a gold medal; for another, after Liu Xiang recovers fully, he still has many chances to realize his dream.

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