Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）

近期, 你所在城市的中學(xué)生就“最美漢字”進(jìn)行投票。請(qǐng)閱讀下面一則新聞報(bào)道, 用英文寫一篇短文, 向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。

High school students recommend ren as message to the world

The Chinese character ren, a word that generally means “benevolence”, has been selected by high school students in a poll(民意調(diào)查)to highlight Chinese culture around the world. The character ren was selected by 8.33 percent of the 3, 000 respondents who took part in the poll, according to one of the organizers, a student from a high school.

It was followed by the characters ai, yi, meng and xiao, which mean ‘‘love”, “one”, “dream’’ and “filial piety”. Those characters ranked in the “top-20 most beautiful Chinese characters”.

China Daily, March 6, 2013. Page 4

你的短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 簡(jiǎn)要概括學(xué)生推薦這五個(gè)漢字的理由。

2. 簡(jiǎn)述你最想推薦的一至兩個(gè)漢字及其寓意。

3. 談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>

注意：

1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述, 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。

Recently, some high school students have conducted a poll asking people to choose some Chinese characters that can best reflect Chinese culture. _________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, some high school students have conducted a poll asking people to choose some Chinese characters that can best reflect Chinese culture.

Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics, which are principles and necessities for a qualified human being.

Of all characters. 1 will also put ren on the top of my list、which is followed by meng. Being ren, that is, being kind, caring and helpful, calls on one to he friendly and considerate to others Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world, feeling happy and optimistic.  

Personally, Chinese characters are so charming that they are treasures of human cultures With deep love for Chinese culture, we should strive to promote them to tile world.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文討論的話題是“最美漢字”從三個(gè)方面展開敘述。1. 簡(jiǎn)要概括學(xué)生推薦這五個(gè)漢字的理由。2. 簡(jiǎn)述你最想推薦的一至兩個(gè)漢字及其寓意。3. 談?wù)勀愕母邢�。要求考生先仔�?xì)閱讀英語短文，在理解內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。