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11．I always prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a good nose for bargains．So when I came across a sporting goods store with a sign"Going Out of Business Sale"，I marched into the crowded store．Up and down the aisles （通道），I wandered，humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale．
All of a sudden，there，at the back of the store sat a canoe（輕舟） exactly like my husband's dream Supremo Numero-Uno，whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years．My heart beat wildly．I pushed my way through the crowds，and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag．There it was，with the manufacturer's suggested price at﹩6，750 plus tax crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR﹩750 AS IS．Must be a mistake．﹩6000 off？Salesman．I had to talk to a salesman．I spotted a young fellow with a"Hi．I'm Mathew"．"Mathew．Tell me about this El Supremo canoe．What's wrong with it？Why is it only﹩750？"
"Oh．There's nothing wrong with it．It's brand new．We're closing the store．It's on clearance like everything else．I'll go check．"A few minutes later he came back and said，"I'm sorry ma'am．Someone made a mistake on the sale tag．It should be﹩4，750 for the whole package．"
I felt tears well up in my eyes．"Oh well"，I said sadly．"Of course，it was too good to be true．This is exactly like my husband's dreamboat．I guess I started to dream myself when I saw that price tag．He's going to be 62 years old Friday．H ad to retire early for his health．It's been hard on just the pension but the stubborn old fool has been saving﹩10 every week for years to buy one just like this．I promise I won't buy anything，but it's just an old man's silly dream，you know．Always said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he retired，"my voice lowered and I turned and walked away．

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I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me．"Do you have﹩750 plus﹩25 for delivery，ma'am？"？""Yes．Yes．That's about all I have，""Well then，you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．We'll even put a bow on it for his birthday．"I started to cry．My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque．
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"Ma'am．There's something you should know．This store was my Grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him．He always promised to retire one day．Said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe．"He swallowed hard．"My Grandpa died，sudden-like，just last week．He was only 68 years old．I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．You just have to make sure he uses it a lot，okay？Promise？""I promise，"I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband．
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
4．續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)寫(xiě)作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容．認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個(gè)詞寫(xiě)一篇短文，按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量使用自己會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．你只要讓你丈夫在星期五早上十點(diǎn)左右坐在前門(mén)上，等我爸爸和我來(lái)卸他的新獨(dú)木舟時(shí)，他就能到了．have sb doing是一個(gè)固定結(jié)構(gòu)，"have+sb．/sth．（賓語(yǔ)）+現(xiàn)在分詞（賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)）"意為"叫/讓/使某人做某事或讓某種情況發(fā)生"．賓語(yǔ) sb．/sth．后面用現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，表示賓語(yǔ)與現(xiàn)在分詞表示的動(dòng)作之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，且動(dòng)作正在進(jìn)行．此句．so 引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，
亮點(diǎn)句型二：I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．我想他會(huì)非常高興你丈夫能得到這只獨(dú)木舟．句子he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe，是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，在這個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句中句子that your husband will get this canoe是形容詞happy的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me．"Do you have 750plus25 for delivery，ma'am？""Yes．Yes．That's about all I have，""Well then，you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）We'll even put a bow on it for his birthday．"I started to cry．My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque．
"Ma'am．There's something you should know．This store was my Grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him．He always promised to retire one day．Said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe．"He swallowed hard．"My Grandpa died，sudden-like，just last week．He was only 68 years old．I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）You just have to make sure he uses it a lot，okay？Promise？""I promise，"I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．