Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jack一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你寒假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：

1、 未及時回信的原因；

2、 你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）；

3、 希望有時間來中國玩。

注意：

1、字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右；

2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack,

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Yours truly,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

To begin with, please accept my sincere apology for not replying to your last letter in time. During those days, I’d been busy preparing for the final exam which was very important to me.

Now the winter vacation is approaching, during which time I want to do many things, one of which is making a trip to some places of interest together with a few of my good friends, aiming to broaden our horizons. Additionally, being a volunteer is another thing I want to do, from which I can benefit a lot. At last, I’d like to do a part-time job, with the purpose of knowing more about society and, at the same time, I can earn some money, which can be called killing two birds with one stone.

What do you think of my plan? Hope you could come to China in your spare time and have a wonderful time with us.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，難度不大。要求考生以李華的身份給你的英國朋友Jack回信。文章要使用第一人稱，時態(tài)較為混亂。要點(diǎn)：1.未及時回信的原因：忙于準(zhǔn)備期末考試；2.假期打算：做兼職，旅行，做志愿者；3.希望對方有時間來中國旅游；要點(diǎn)均已經(jīng)給出來了，考生切忌逐句翻譯，一定要使用合適的連接詞串聯(lián)上下文。同時要靈活使用各種句式，如倒裝句、省略句等，讓文章富有變化不死板。