Question

10．請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章．
Every year，when new school year begins，many Chinese parents of freshmen（大學(xué)一年級(jí)新生） insist on accompanying their children to universities．Other than proudly witnessing the moment when their children step into universities，parents insist that they should assist with any unexpected problems their children might face．
In order to teach incoming freshmen their first lesson in independence，Tsinghua University has set up a"parents-restricted"area where students have to go through the enrollment （入學(xué)）procedure all by themselves．On social networking sites like www．renren．com，students are inviting their peers to go to university together，not only for safety，but also to avoid parents'overprotection．
寫作內(nèi)容
1．用約30個(gè)單詞概括上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)"家長(zhǎng)送孩子上大學(xué)"這一現(xiàn)象的看法，并用2～3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法．
寫作要求
1．寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；
2．作文中不能直接出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
Every year，there are many freshmen in China who are accompanied by their parents to college enrollment．However，Tsinghua University and some social networking sites encourage students to go it alone or with their peers．
In my opinion，it's unnecessary for parents to follow their children to universities．Children shouldn't be spoiled and letting them enroll alone is a good opportunity to develop their self-reliance ability．After all，they have to learn to e independent and take care of themselves when they are far away from their parents．Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions．Chances are that they will make friends with each other．Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved．As for parents，they are expressing their true love when they let their children go．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions
除此之外，對(duì)于新大學(xué)生去邀請(qǐng)同行的旅伴是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的主意．
高分句型二：
Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved．
因此，父母越少陪伴他們會(huì)越好，學(xué)生會(huì)變得更加獨(dú)立，他們的社交能力會(huì)有所提高．

解答 Every year，there are many freshmen in China who are accompanied by their parents to college enrollment．However，Tsinghua University and some social networking sites encourage students to go it alone or with their peers．
In my opinion，it's unnecessary for parents to follow their children to universities．Children shouldn't be spoiled and letting them enroll alone is a good opportunity to develop their self-reliance ability．After all，they have to learn to e independent and take care of themselves when they are far away from their parents．Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions（高分句型一）．Chances are that they will make friends with each other．Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved（高分句型二）．As for parents，they are expressing their true love when they let their children go．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．