Question

6．假設(shè)你是高一學(xué)生李華，將要參加學(xué)校的英語演講比賽．你要演講的題目是"How to Improve Our Physical（身體的） and Mental（心理的） Health"．請(qǐng)綜合以下其他同學(xué)提出的意見并加以補(bǔ)充，寫一篇演講稿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
  2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Zhou Yonglin：Having more fruit and vegetables can make us healthy．
WangFang：If we want to be physically healthy，we should do regular exercise．
Liu Xu：Talking with friends and traveling a lot can take mental health issues away from us．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
We can have fruit and vegetables，which are full of the vitamins that our body needs．
我們可以吃水果和蔬菜，這些富含人體所需的維生素．
高分句型二：
Talking with friends and reading a good book are great ways to do this．Whatever you do，just remember to keep happy．
與朋友交談和閱讀一本好書是偉大的方式做到這一點(diǎn)．無論你做什么，只記得保持快樂．

解答 How to Improve Our Physical and Mental Health
Boys and girls，what do you think are the most important things in the world？As far as I am concerned，health is the certainly among them．Today，I'd like to talk about keeping healthy．
To have a healthy body，we must pay attention to what we eat．We can have fruit and vegetables，which are full of the vitamins that our body needs（高分句型一）．For food that is high in fat，such as meat，we should have some，but not too much．Meanwhile，regular exercise plays an important role in physical health．
Besides physical health，we also need to keep a positive frame of mind．Talking with friends and reading a good book are great ways to do this．Whatever you do，just remember to keep happy（高分句型二）．
These things are easy to say．What we need is a strong will and to keep doing them．
That's all．
Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．