Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勎⑿Φ淖饔?
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls. 
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；
②內(nèi)容只需涉及一個(gè)方面；
③詞數(shù)為100左右.

Answer 1

No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.
A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan/over took Wen Chuan. Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness. 
It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.

試題分析：本文談?wù)摰脑掝}是微笑的作用，要求結(jié)合生活中的事例。屬于開(kāi)放性作文的寫(xiě)作，以第三人稱為主，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情的時(shí)候可以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。要點(diǎn)：1.敘述微笑的巨大作用，可以使用諺語(yǔ)。2.使用具體事例：可以是身邊發(fā)生的事情；3.總結(jié)：既然微笑的作用是如此巨大，那么在我們以后的生活中就盡量多微笑。完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文中最大的特點(diǎn)是高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用非常到位，如第一段中的部分倒裝句：Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted.否定詞not only放在了句首，后面的主句使用了部分倒裝的形式。文章最后一句It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.使用了主語(yǔ)從句中的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用法。