Question

短文改錯(cuò) Dear Tracy, 　 Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 1．________ me as a careless children．He doesn’t value my opinions． 2．________ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 3．________ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 4．________ all time．I think he fails to set an example to me to 5．________ follow．But he often says, “Doing as I say, not as I do．” 6．________ Even worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests, 7．________ making me feel hurting．I love my father, but I can’t 8．________ bear what he does．I have been tried many times 9．________ to talk with he but he never listens．Please, help me． 10．________ Puzzled

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解析：

　　1．去掉but　although和but不能用在同一個(gè)句子中。

　　2．children→child　父親把“我”看作是粗心的孩子，應(yīng)該是單數(shù)。

　　3．a(chǎn)bout→for　根據(jù)句意判斷，leaving things lying around in the house應(yīng)該是punishes me的原因。

　　4．did→does　全文的主體時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在時(shí)，講述一般情況。

　　5．a(chǎn)ll后加the　all the time為固定短語(yǔ)，意為“一直；老是”。

　　6．Doing→Do　父親說(shuō)的話應(yīng)該是對(duì)我的要求，所以用祈使句。

　　7．√

　　8．hurting→hurt　hurt的過(guò)去式和過(guò)去分詞與原形同形。

　　9．去掉been　try意為“嘗試”時(shí)，為不及物動(dòng)詞，不能用于被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

　　10．第一個(gè)he→him　介詞with后應(yīng)用賓格形式。