Question

12．最近我校高一年級舉辦了一次英語書法比賽．大部分同學們積極參與，但少數(shù)同學書寫不好，也不愿改善．請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文，分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并發(fā)表自己的看法．

現(xiàn)象	一些學生不善書寫，也不愿改善書寫
原因	1．可以借助電腦，沒有必要練字；  2．功課太忙，沒時間練字； 3．練字見效慢，很難練好．
你的看法	2-3點．

注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition                                  

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting
高分句型二：
What's more，practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can't make rapid progress in a short time
句型一 who are poor at handwriting don't want 該句是一個由who引導的定語從句，who在從句中做主語，替代前面的先行詞students
句型二 ①practicing handwriting is so difficult  該主句的主語為動名詞充當，此時應注意，謂語使用單數(shù) ②they can't make rapid progress in a short time該句是一個由that引導的結果狀語從句
此外，該書面表達中還包含有以下重要短語和高級詞匯：
    take part in  參加    be poor at  不擅長于   on the one hand…on the other hand  一方面另一方面     as far as sb be concerned  就某人看來
該書面表達中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級短語和詞匯的使用，使得文章更層次分明，表述更加確切完整．

解答 In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition．Many students took an active part in the activity．However，some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting．（高分句型一）The reasons are as follows：
   On the one hand，they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use computer．On the other hand，they argue that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice．What's more，practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can't make rapid progress in a short time．（原因闡述）（高分句型二）
   As far as I'm concerned，having a beautiful and neat handwriting is of benefit to students themselves．Besides，good handwriting is always appreciated by people，especially by teachers．Therefore more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．（個人意見）

點評 該書面表達為圖表類，通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內(nèi)容作為寫作參考和依據(jù)．考生應細致觀察圖表內(nèi)容，用準確的、簡單明了的語言將圖表內(nèi)容表達清楚．另外，平時應注意積累相應短語和詞匯，以使得行文有更多的亮點．