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4．人們快餐現(xiàn)在在中國很流行，但快餐對人的身體卻沒什么好處．請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn) 以Fast food為題寫一篇短文，準(zhǔn)備發(fā)表在一份生活雜志上．
1．快餐在中國非常流行，人們尤其是兒童和青少年喜歡吃快餐．
2．快餐受歡迎至少有以下方面的原因：
A．方便，節(jié)約時(shí)間；
B．既可在快餐店里吃又可帶回家吃；
C．快餐店環(huán)境整潔、干凈，服務(wù)周到，食品質(zhì)量有保證．
3．從營養(yǎng)角度講，快餐食品卻不盡如人意．
4．建議：如時(shí)間來不及可考慮吃快餐，但以偶爾品嘗為宜；兒童應(yīng)盡量少吃快餐． 詞數(shù)：120左右．
參考詞匯：流行 popular；方便的convenient； 保證guarantee；營養(yǎng)nutrition
Fast Food
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China，especiallyamong children and teenagers．（高分句型一）
There are several reasons for its popularity．First，it is very convenient and saves a lot of time．Second，you can either eat it there or take it away．Third，the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable．However，in terms of nutrition，fast food is far from satisfactory．（高分句型二）It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value．
Fast food is only a good choice when you are in hurry and turn to it once in a while．（高分句型三）It's good for people，especially children，to eat fast food as little as possible．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息人們快餐現(xiàn)在在中國很流行，但快餐對人的身體卻沒什么好處．請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn) 以Fast food為題寫一篇短文，準(zhǔn)備發(fā)表在一份生活雜志上，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：快餐在中國非常流行，人們尤其是兒童和青少年喜歡吃快餐．快餐受歡迎至少有以下方面的原因：
A．方便，節(jié)約時(shí)間；
B．既可在快餐店里吃又可帶回家吃；
C．快餐店環(huán)境整潔、干凈，服務(wù)周到，食品質(zhì)量有保證．
從營養(yǎng)角度講，快餐食品卻不盡如人意．
建議：如時(shí)間來不及可考慮吃快餐，但以偶爾品嘗為宜；兒童應(yīng)盡量少吃快餐． 詞數(shù)：120左右．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：especially 尤其，特別；However然而；in terms of就…而言；a balanced diet平衡膳食；be good for對…有益；First首先；Second其次；Third第三；
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China，especially among children and teenagers．（高分句型一）
However，in terms of nutrition，fast food is far from satisfactory．（高分句型二）
Fast food is only a good choice when you are in hurry and turn to it once in a while．（高分句型三）

解答 Fast Food
      Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China，especially among children and teenagers．（高分句型一）
      There are several reasons for its popularity．First，it is very convenient and saves a lot of time．Second，you can either eat it there or take it away．Third，the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable．However，in terms of nutrition，fast food is far from satisfactory．（高分句型二）It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value．
      Fast food is only a good choice when you are in hurry and turn to it once in a while．（高分句型三）It's good for people，especially children，to eat fast food as little as possible．

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