贊同 | 反對(duì) | 你的觀(guān)點(diǎn) |
1.人人有長(zhǎng)處和不足,成績(jī)差的學(xué)生也有可取之處; 2.通過(guò)幫助學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)從而使他們建立自信. | 1.部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常違反校規(guī),擔(dān)心自己會(huì)受影響,養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣. 2.老是問(wèn)問(wèn)題,使自己不能專(zhuān)心學(xué)習(xí). |
分析 本文是一封信,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,所以只注意組織好篇章結(jié)構(gòu)和要點(diǎn)的表述即可.其中要點(diǎn)包括1.表示贊同的同學(xué)的觀(guān)點(diǎn):(1).人人有長(zhǎng)處和不足,成績(jī)差的學(xué)生也有可取之處;(2).相互學(xué)習(xí),建立友誼;(3).通過(guò)幫助學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)從而使他們建立自信.2.表示不贊同的同學(xué)的觀(guān)點(diǎn):(1).部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常違反校規(guī)校紀(jì),擔(dān)心自己會(huì)受影響,養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣;(2).老是問(wèn)問(wèn)題,使自己不能專(zhuān)心學(xué)習(xí);(3).作者自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),這需要自己發(fā)揮想象,自己組織觀(guān)點(diǎn).在寫(xiě)這封信時(shí)要說(shuō)出同學(xué)們討論的主題,然后論述不同方同學(xué)的觀(guān)點(diǎn).注意觀(guān)點(diǎn)要明確,理由要充分;而且語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)練,不啰嗦.本文應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格符合書(shū)信的文體要求,是一篇較好的范文.在文中作者使用了Some are for the idea.However,others don't hold the same view.In my opinion,作為每段的概括句,使文章語(yǔ)言自然流暢,內(nèi)容過(guò)渡自然.As they know,as well as,Although,Therefore,learn from each other,In addition 等連詞和短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用為文章增添了許多色彩.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.
解答 Dear editor,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.(高分句型一)
Some are for the idea.As they know,everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses.Although they are not good at lessons,they might do well in other fields like sports or arts.(高分句型二)Therefore,they can learn form each other and they may develop a friendship.In addition,top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons,which benefits them all.(高分句型三)(贊成的觀(guān)點(diǎn))
However,others don't hold the same view.They think some slower students are always making trouble,such as keeping talking in class,breaking school rules,which may lead to them forming the bad habits.(高分句型四)Besides,slower students often ask top students questions,which has a bad effect on their studies.(高分句型五)(反對(duì)的觀(guān)點(diǎn))
In my opinion,I would like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each and make progress together.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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