Question

6．假如你是某中學(xué)高三畢業(yè)生李華，你將作為畢業(yè)生代表在畢業(yè)晚會上用英文作一簡短的告別演講，談?wù)勀銓Ω咧猩�活的看法�?br />（1）對獲得的幫助表示感謝；
（2）對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議；
（3）努力學(xué)習(xí)，實現(xiàn)人生夢想；
（4）對母校和老師的祝福．
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My teachers an fellow students，
In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!As  senior three student，I have much to share with you．Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life would be different．Secondly，I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．Above all，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"
Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 這是在畢業(yè)晚會上作的一個簡短的告別演講．根據(jù)題目呀可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明演講主題；二對獲得的幫助表示感謝，對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議以及自己努力學(xué)習(xí)，實現(xiàn)人生夢想的決心；三對母校和老師的祝福．
高分句型：
1．Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．句子里show my appreciation to 表示"對某人展示感激"；standing by me 是現(xiàn)在分詞做定語，修飾 those，表示"支持"； included是過去分詞做定語，修飾teachers，parents and friends．
首先，我要對一直幫助我的老師，父母和朋友表達(dá)我的感激．
2．Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．句子里on behalf of 表示"代表"；the graduates 表示"畢業(yè)生"；extend表示"給予"； respectable 表示"值得尊重的"．
最后，代表所有出席的畢業(yè)生，讓我把我們真誠的祝愿給予我們的母校和這里值得尊重的老師們．

解答 My teachers and fellow students，
    In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!As a senior three student，I have much to share with you．（表明演講主題）
   Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．【高分句型一】Without their help and advice，my life would be different．Secondly，I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．Above all，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"（對獲得的幫助表示感謝，對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議以及自己努力學(xué)習(xí)，實現(xiàn)人生夢想的決心）
  Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．【高分句型二】Thank you!（對母校和老師的祝福）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般都只給出只言片語的提示，而不是完整的表達(dá)．此時我們就必須在大腦中將各信息點補(bǔ)充完整，適時使用一些短語和句型，以及各種從句． 此時要記住，"有話好好說，有話慢慢說"，不要想著一蹴而就．我們有這樣的體驗：提綱式書面表達(dá)的寫作中，我們還沒寫幾句，就感覺所有要點都已經(jīng)表達(dá)完 了．在寫作中要注意避免這樣的情況，只能是多讀多寫．