Question

6．近日，西安醫(yī)學院用狗做實驗后遺棄引發(fā)社會熱議．假設你是李華，請給校報英文專欄"My Opinion"投稿，談談你的觀點并呼吁保護動物．
注意：
1．詞數100左右：
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：西安醫(yī)學院Xi'an Medical University．
Dear editor
Recently，the Xi'an Medical University experimental dogshad been abandoned led social buzz．How cruel behavior it is!Animal is the friend of mankind，such cruel behavior should be eliminated（高分句型一）．
As far as I am concerned，something must be done to stop this illegal action．We believe"no buying，no killing"．First，we must make concerning laws to protect these animals in danger．Second，we must take some measures to protect animals effectively．Animals are our friends and part of our environment．Third，we should raise people's awareness to protect animals and our environment．In this way，we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development．What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies（高分句型二）．
It is my belief that all human beings can make a difference together．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Animal is the friend of mankind，such cruel behavior should be eliminated．
動物是人類的朋友，這樣殘忍的行為應該被杜絕．
高分句型二：
What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies．
我想要做的是提高人們保護環(huán)境的意識，呼吁更多的人關心我們地球的伴侶．

解答 Dear editor
Recently，the Xi'an Medical University experimental dogs had been abandoned led social buzz．How cruel behavior it is!Animal is the friend of mankind，such cruel behavior should be eliminated（高分句型一）．
As far as I am concerned，something must be done to stop this illegal action．We believe"no buying，no killing"．First，we must make concerning laws to protect these animals in danger．Second，we must take some measures to protect animals effectively．Animals are our friends and part of our environment．Third，we should raise people's awareness to protect animals and our environment．In this way，we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development．What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies（高分句型二）．
It is my belief that all human beings can make a difference together．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．
Yours
Li Hua

點評 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．