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Tom三年前隨父母來中國(guó)，現(xiàn)在要回國(guó)，假如你是班長(zhǎng)趙寧，請(qǐng)你代表全班同學(xué)起草一篇?dú)g送辭，內(nèi)容包括：

1．在中國(guó)逗留期間，相處融洽，互相幫助。

2．同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)英語興趣更濃，進(jìn)步大。

3．Tom 喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，積極參加校運(yùn)會(huì)并為班級(jí)贏得榮譽(yù)。

3．以后經(jīng)常聯(lián)系，希望Tom再來中國(guó)。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右。文章開頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）

2．文章應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)。

Dear friends,

Today we are having a party to honor our friend Tom, who is returning to his own country with his parents…….

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Answer 1

Dear friends,

Today we are having a party to honor our friend Tom, who is returning to his own country with his parents. How

time flies! It is three years since he came to our school. During this period, we have helped each other and thus

have become good friends. What's more, many of us have become more interested in English and have made great

progress in it.

Tom is fond of sports very much. He not only took an active part in our school sports meeting but also won honor

for our class.

Tom, we all hope that when you return to your homeland, you will get in touch with us as often as possible. We also hope you will come to China again some day. Good luck, Tom. May you have a pleasant trip home!

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求寫一篇?dú)g送辭送給即將回國(guó)的Tom。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：Tom與大家相處融洽、互相幫助；同學(xué)們對(duì)英語產(chǎn)生了更濃的興趣；Tom喜愛運(yùn)動(dòng)并為班級(jí)贏得了榮譽(yù)；經(jīng)常聯(lián)系，期待再到中國(guó)來。作文詞數(shù)在100左右，開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；作文要包含所有要點(diǎn)，不能生搬硬套，注意行文的連貫性；不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了較多語法知識(shí)：定語從句who is returning to his own country；感嘆句How time flies!；固定句型It is three years since he came to our school；時(shí)間狀語從句when you return to your homeland；賓語從句hope you will come to China again some day；固定句型May you have a pleasant trip home!等，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使作文內(nèi)容更加豐富；

范文注意使用During this period, What's more來聯(lián)系前后句，使文章顯得有調(diào)理，比較連貫；

范文使用了較多的固定短語：made great progress in，is fond of，not only ...but also，took an active part in，get in touch with，as often as possible，使作文內(nèi)容比較充實(shí)。

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