11.你升入高中已兩年了,這兩年中你經(jīng)歷了很多,也收獲很多,請(qǐng)你給你的父母寫一封信,告訴他們你這兩年來(lái)的高中生活,信中需包括以下要點(diǎn):
1.遠(yuǎn)離父母,學(xué)會(huì)了獨(dú)立;
2.升入高中以來(lái)認(rèn)識(shí)了很多優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)和老師,和他們中的很多人交了朋友,并從他們身上學(xué)到了很多東西;
3.喜歡學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ),對(duì)自己的成績(jī)很滿意;
4.課余時(shí)間參加各種課外活動(dòng),比如英語(yǔ)角.
注意:1.短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含以上全部信息,可補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明或強(qiáng)調(diào)順序以使短文連貫,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù).
2.詞數(shù)100左右
3.英語(yǔ)角 the English Corner
Dear Mom and Dad,
How time flies.
It is almost two years since I entered the senior high school.Now I'd like to tell you something about my school life.
As I'm away from you,I have learned how to live on my own.And I've got to know my classmates and teachers,from whom I've learned a lot.(高分句型一)To my joy,I've also made friends with some of them.
I like English and math best and have made great progress.I'm pleased about that.So don't worry about my grades.Besides,in my spare time,I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities.(高分句型二)I often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English.As a result,I'm good at English.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Xxx.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息你升入高中已兩年了,這兩年中你經(jīng)歷了很多,也收獲很多,請(qǐng)你給你的父母寫一封信,告訴他們你這兩年來(lái)的高中生活,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:遠(yuǎn)離父母,學(xué)會(huì)了獨(dú)立;升入高中以來(lái)認(rèn)識(shí)了很多優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)和老師,和他們中的很多人交了朋友,并從他們身上學(xué)到了很多東西;喜歡學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ),對(duì)自己的成績(jī)很滿意;課余時(shí)間參加各種課外活動(dòng),比如英語(yǔ)角.  2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be away from距離遠(yuǎn);on one's own獨(dú)自;To my joy令我高興的是;make great progress取得進(jìn)步;Besides另外;in my spare time在我空閑時(shí)間;take part in 參加;As a result結(jié)果;
And I've got to know my classmates and teachers,from whom I've learned a lot.(高分句型一)
Besides,in my spare time,I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Mom and Dad,
       How time flies. It is almost two years since I entered the senior high school.Now I'd like to tell you something about my school life.
       As I'm away from you,I have learned how to live on my own.And I've got to know my classmates and teachers,from whom I've learned a lot.(高分句型一)To my joy,I've also made friends with some of them.
       I like English and math best and have made great progress.I'm pleased about that.So don't worry about my grades.Besides,in my spare time,I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities.(高分句型二)I often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English.As a result,I'm good at English.
       Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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