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8．假設你叫李華，是長沙市某中學學生．最近你在網上看到英國某中學在為即將來中國進行訪學的學生征詢寄宿家庭，你有意申請．請根據下表提供的信息用英語給該校相關部門寫封信．
1．自我介紹．
2．能夠提供優(yōu)越的條件，如住房寬敞、母親善長烹飪等．
3．語言優(yōu)勢．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：寄宿家庭host family
Dear sir，
I am Li Hua，a student in Changsha，Hunan Province in China．I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of your students．（高分句型一）
　　I live with my parents in a large and clean house within easy reach of some places of interest in Changsha．（高分句型二）We will be very glad to show our foreign friends around．My mother is especially good at cooking，so our friends will have the chance to enjoy Chinese cuisine．Besides，as I'm good at English and my parents are both English teachers，we won't have any difficulty in communication．With what is mentioned above，I think we can be a good host family for your students．I would greatly appreciate it if I could be offered the chance．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假設你叫李華，是長沙市某中學學生．最近你在網上看到英國某中學在為即將來中國進行訪學的學生征詢寄宿家庭，你有意申請．請根據下表提供的信息用英語給該校相關部門寫封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：自我介紹．能夠提供優(yōu)越的條件，如住房寬敞、母親善長烹飪等．語言優(yōu)勢．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：places of interest名勝古跡；show sbaround領著某人參觀；be good at擅長Besides另外；have  difficulty in 在…方面有困難；
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of your students．（高分句型一）
I live with my parents in a large and clean house within easy reach of some places of interest in Changsha．（高分句型二）
I would greatly appreciate it if I could be offered the chance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear sir，
　　I am Li Hua，a student in Changsha，Hunan Province in China．I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of your students．（高分句型一）
　　I live with my parents in a large and clean house within easy reach of some places of interest in Changsha．（高分句型二）We will be very glad to show our foreign friends around．My mother is especially good at cooking，so our friends will have the chance to enjoy Chinese cuisine．Besides，as I'm good at English and my parents are both English teachers，we won't have any difficulty in communication．With what is mentioned above，I think we can be a good host family for your students．I would greatly appreciate it if I could be offered the chance．（高分句型三）
　　Looking forward to your reply．
　                                                                                                                                                                                                　Yours，
　　                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．