Question

上月，我們公司以35歲以下的人群作為調(diào)查對象, 選取了1000人進行了關(guān)于“網(wǎng)上購物”的一項調(diào)查, 調(diào)查情況如下：

你是否愿意在網(wǎng)上購物？
結(jié)果	64%愿意	36%不愿意
原因	1.方便, 在家可買到所需物品 2.網(wǎng)上商品比較便宜, 而且可選擇的品牌多	1.害怕買到贗品 2.擔(dān)心被騙錢
結(jié)論	只要防范網(wǎng)上購物的弊端, 將有越來越多的人選擇 網(wǎng)上購物。

 
[寫作內(nèi)容]
根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇調(diào)查報告, 內(nèi)容包括：
1. 調(diào)查時間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對象;
2. 愿意網(wǎng)上購物的人占調(diào)查人數(shù)的百分比；
3.人們愿意在網(wǎng)上購物的主要原因；
4. 人們不愿意在網(wǎng)上購物的主要原因；
5. 本次調(diào)查的結(jié)論。

Answer 1

Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.

試題分析：本篇寫作題材是網(wǎng)上購物的兩種不同觀點。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述，正方觀點及依據(jù)和自己觀點。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達意思的能力。考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點說明】64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. 這句話有原因狀語從句和讓步狀語從句，還有過去分詞做定語，也有it做形式賓語， they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. 這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語， only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line. 這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章還使用Besides, In conclusion,這些詞使文章更加連貫。