Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改l0處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Xiaolan, who is fourteen, a middle school student in Southern China. She is a one of the best student in her class and  she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressed an d going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

Answer 1

    
【小題1】a前加is  
【小題2】student--- students 
【小題3】she后去掉was
【小題4】seating---seated
【小題5】and---but
【小題6】obvious---obviously
【小題7】had---has
【小題8】long---longer
【小題9】going to后去掉the
【小題10】which---them

解析試題分析：十四歲的中學(xué)生小蘭去年榮獲了青少年科學(xué)家獎(jiǎng)。當(dāng)她做在教室里的時(shí)候，她與旁人無(wú)異，然而課下的生活，她卻是與別人截然不同的，因?yàn)樗�天生殘疾，腰部以下沒(méi)有知覺(jué)。別人能夠做成的事情，對(duì)于她來(lái)說(shuō)卻是要付出很多。
【小題1】考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。Xiaolan, who is fourteen, a middle school student分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知句子缺少謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，所以在a前加is  。
【小題2】考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。She is one of the best student。one of后面需跟復(fù)數(shù)名詞，意思是“….其中之一”，所以把student改為 students 。                
【小題3】考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。she was won an award ，句中動(dòng)詞won做謂語(yǔ)，所以把she后was去掉 。
【小題4】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。When seating in the classroom，從結(jié)構(gòu)可知，該短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，seat和句子主語(yǔ)she 是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以把seating改為seated 。                                                            
【小題5】考查連詞用法。and after class her life is different. 從語(yǔ)境可知此句和上句she looks just like all her classmates是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以把a(bǔ)nd改為but。
【小題6】考查副詞用法。her life is obvious different。此處different是形容詞，要用副詞修飾，所以把obvious-改為obviously 。
【小題7】考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。She had to use a wheelchair全文講述現(xiàn)在的事情，所以把had改為has 。
【小題8】考查形容詞用法。it often takes her a little long 從語(yǔ)境可知此處是她與別人相比做事所用的時(shí)間要長(zhǎng)，所以把long改為longer 。
【小題9】考查冠詞用法。and going to the school 。固定短語(yǔ)go to school “去上學(xué)”，故去掉the。
【小題10】考查代詞用法。and one of which received an award 。 因?yàn)橛羞B詞and所以后面是并列句，故需要把關(guān)系代詞which改為人稱(chēng)代詞them 。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。