假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)字符號(hào)(＾)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

3．改錯(cuò)格式錯(cuò)誤不得分。

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao，Shandong province on February 1995．I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer．The main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer．

I like English and computer best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp．My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter．

1.on-in

2.去掉the

3.happy- happily

4.graduate- graduated

5.study- studied

6.it-them

7.winned-won

8.listening- listening to

9.stamp- stamps

10.is-are

【解析】

試題分析：本題考查短文改錯(cuò)。

1. province on February 1995，此處介詞搭配錯(cuò)誤，在具體的某年某月某日前用on，而其他表示泛指的時(shí)間前用in，此處未具體到哪一天應(yīng)用in。故on-in

2. started the school in 2001 when I was six.，the表示特指，表示的是特指某某學(xué)校，一般是前文有所指的時(shí)候才用，而此處是開(kāi)始上學(xué)，指的是一般的情況，并未特指上的是哪一個(gè)學(xué)校，故去掉the

3. studied happy in Guangming Primary School ，study為動(dòng)詞，而happy為形容詞，形容詞不能修飾動(dòng)詞，只有副詞才可以修飾動(dòng)詞，故happy- happily

4. that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer．本句為and的并列句，前后時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)保持一致，前句時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去式，后句也應(yīng)是過(guò)去式，故graduate- graduated

5. main subjects I study at schoo1，該句是承接的上文，描述的是過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)用過(guò)去式，故study- studied

6. like English and computer best and I am very good at it ，前面提到了兩個(gè)主體英語(yǔ)和電腦，代詞應(yīng)該代替的是兩個(gè)東西，應(yīng)用他們，故it-them

7. year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.，此句用的是過(guò)去式，但是win的過(guò)去式不是winned 而是won，故winned-won

8. enjoy listening popular music ，listen to…是固定短語(yǔ)，表示聽(tīng)….此處表示我喜歡聽(tīng)流行音樂(lè)，故listening- listening to

9. collecting stamp ，stamp為可數(shù)名詞，前面無(wú)限定詞時(shí)，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故stamp- stamps

10. favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter．賓語(yǔ)為兩個(gè)主體游泳和滑冰，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)，故is-are

考點(diǎn)：考查時(shí)態(tài)、詞形變換、介詞搭配等

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