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假定你是一名中學生，名叫王林，于2010年3月28日寫信給21st Century的編輯，反映目前濫養(yǎng)寵物的問題。你認為寵物過多，噪音擾民；污染環(huán)境；你周圍許多人尤其是小孩都曾經被嚇到或咬傷；甚至會導致某些疾病的傳播。所以你希望得到媒體的關注和支持
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March 28,  2010
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time ,but I really want to tell you something about he problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
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Yours  truly,
Wang  Lin

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March  28,  2010
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time , but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
I consider the problem more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more ,it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.
Yours  truly，
Wang  Lin

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