Question

短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life. With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth. Thus, man’s changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results. Today, pollution of the air and water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet. Like we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even formed a great threat to man’s existence. Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment. Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

第一行：their改為his  ；

第二行：that去掉  ；  thus改為however ；

第三行：has改為have  ；  the去掉   ； a改為an ；

第四行：like改為as   ；  in改為 about ；

第六行：pass改為passed   ；   causing改為caused

【解析】

第一行：此處代指：man應(yīng)該使用單數(shù)的：his，也可參考下文的：his way of life，故此their改為his；

第二行：此處是單句不需要連詞，所以that去掉；前后句子屬于轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故此thus改為however；

第三行： 句子主語(yǔ)為：changes是復(fù)數(shù)，所以應(yīng)該把has改為have；名詞air為不可數(shù)，the多余；單詞increasing為元音讀音開(kāi)頭，所以a改為an；

第四行：此處應(yīng)該使用連詞：as表示正如、正像，所以like改為as；此處bring about表示帶來(lái)、造成之意；

第六行：分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知：laws和動(dòng)詞pass屬于被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以pass改為passed；句子譯文如下：由于對(duì)生活壞境缺少關(guān)愛(ài)造成的嚴(yán)重后果，所以屬于被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故此causing改為caused。