Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）

人人都想成功，但是生活中失敗卻不可避免。作為一名高中生，我們該如何看待失��？請結(jié)合以下提示用英語寫一篇短文。

失敗的積極意義	1. 有助于認(rèn)識自身優(yōu)缺點
2. 促進(jìn)自我提高
3. ……
應(yīng)對失敗的措施	1. 勇敢面對
2. 分析原因
3. ……
自我感受	……

注意：

1、字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2、對所有要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。

All of us experience failure and are afraid of it. However, every coin has two sides.____

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Answer 1

【答案】

All of us experience failure and are afraid of it. However, every coin has two sides. Failure also has its advantages. It provides us with an opportunity to see our strengths and weaknesses clearly, enabling us to find what is the most suitable. On the other hand, failure can be a good teacher, telling us where we need improvements and where we should invest more time and energy.

Failure is something unavoidable. Properly handled, though, it can teach us a lot. First of all, we should face it bravely instead of complaining about the unfairness of life. What’s more, we should analyze the reasons timely to avoid making similar mistakes. Last but not least, we are supposed to make appropriate changes and more efforts. Only in this way are we more likely to succeed.

As for me, I have a positive attitude towards failure, before I believe there is always some wisdom to be learned from failure. In a word, I will keep in mind that failure is the mother of success.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文，寫作時注意：1. 仔細(xì)審題。根據(jù)寫作任務(wù)，要求學(xué)生認(rèn)真審讀提綱，領(lǐng)會意圖，捕捉信息，確定文章時態(tài)及體裁。2. 撰寫提綱。構(gòu)思文章要點，寫出每個段落主題句、關(guān)鍵詞，然后確定細(xì)節(jié)和內(nèi)容要點。3. 簡寫初稿。經(jīng)過審題和列提綱后，開始寫作，有意識地使用固定句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞，把段落按邏輯順序連成一體，形成基本連貫的初稿。復(fù)查是書面表達(dá)不可缺少的環(huán)節(jié)。要檢查（1）要點是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無錯誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無習(xí)語及固定搭配等方面的錯誤。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。