Question

12．假如你是李華，你剛收到了你的朋友王梅的電子郵件，她在郵件里向你詢問在高中如何學(xué)好英語．請你根據(jù)下列的內(nèi)容給她寫封回信．
1 上課認(rèn)真聽講，做好筆記，課后及時復(fù)習(xí)
2 詞匯是基礎(chǔ)，每天早上花半個小時的時間背誦單詞，朗讀課文
3 課外多與同學(xué)用英語交流，提高聽力和口語能力
注意：詞數(shù)120-150，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)
內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫
Dear Wang Mei，
I am very glad to have receive your E-mail．Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school
First of all，you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class．（高分句型一）As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance．（高分句型二）You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud．What's more，try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class．In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English．Last but not least，you should develop theHabit of keeping a diary，which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt．（高分句型三）
I hope these suggestions will be of use to you．Remember：where there is a will，there is a way．
Best wishes
yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，你剛收到了你的朋友王梅的電子郵件，她在郵件里向你詢問在高中如何學(xué)好英語，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：上課認(rèn)真聽講，做好筆記，課后及時復(fù)習(xí)；詞匯是基礎(chǔ)，每天早上花半個小時的時間背誦單詞，朗讀課文；課外多與同學(xué)用英語交流，提高聽力和口語能力  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：First of all首先；take notes 記筆記；go over 復(fù)習(xí)；As is known to all眾所周知；What's more而且；Last but not least最后同樣最重要；be of use 有用的
First of all，you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class．（高分句型一）
As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance．（高分句型二）
Last but not least，you should develop the Habit of keeping a diary，which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Mei，
        I am very glad to have receive your E-mail．Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school
        First of all，you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class．（高分句型一）As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance．（高分句型二）You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud．What's more，try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class．In this way you  can improve your listening and spoken English．Last but not least，you should develop the Habit of keeping a diary，which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt．（高分句型三）
       I hope these suggestions will be of use to you．Remember：where there is a will，there is a way．
       Best wishes
                                                                                                                    yours，
                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．