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16．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Chris剛剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)，感到一切都很陌生．他在郵件中向你詢問如何盡快融入新環(huán)境．請你根據(jù)以下信息回信：
1．多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；
2．積極參加學(xué)�；顒�；
3．向老師尋求幫助．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Chris，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的書信，同時也屬于提綱類短文．要求以李華的身份給筆友Chris寫信，回答他關(guān)于如何融入新環(huán)境的問題．所以要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主的時態(tài)．要點(diǎn)：1．知悉對方轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)以后難以融入新環(huán)境．2．多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；3．積極參加學(xué)�；顒�；4．向老師尋求幫助．考生可以適當(dāng)添加一些書信轉(zhuǎn)換常見的串聯(lián)句，如在文章最后可以加上I am looking forward to hearing from you．等句子．建議文章分成三段，第一段敘述知悉對方的轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)以后不適應(yīng)新學(xué)校的情況．第二段闡述具體的建議．第三段表示希望自己的建議有效，并期待收到對方的回信．
【名師點(diǎn)睛】
本篇范文是難得一篇優(yōu)秀的提綱來作文．本文從題材來說屬于應(yīng)用文，要點(diǎn)都給出來了．文章的結(jié)構(gòu)也不存在較大的難題，所以范文在遣詞造句方面下足了功夫．最突出的就是文章中的高級句式，如非限制性定語從句…in more activities，which usually involve teamwork…；分詞做狀語用法Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers；同時范文中串聯(lián)詞的使用也是一個亮點(diǎn)，第二段中提出了三個建議，作者使用了first、second連接了這些要點(diǎn)．
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）
In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）
Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Chris，
      I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．
      First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）
     I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know． 
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．