Question

【題目】短文中有10處錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Mao Zedong once wrote a poem in which he dreams of "walls of stone of hold clouds and rains tills a smooth lake rises in the narrow gorges".Now his dreams have been come true.The power of the Yangtze River has been harnessed by the Three Gorges Dam.Most of China's energy is produced by burning coal,that causes serious air pollution and increases global warming.Therefore,the dam will generate electricity equals to about 40 millions tons of coal without causing so many pollution.The reservoir has flooded a lot of cities and towns.More than a million of people has moved form their homes.About 800 historical relics have been submerged.

Answer 1

【答案】1.dreams---dreamed;

2.hold后面加 back;

3.rains---rain;

4.been劃掉

5.that---which;

6.Therefore---However;

7.equals---equal

8.many---much

9.of 劃掉

10.has---have

【解析】本文是一篇說明文。介紹了用三峽大壩代替煤炭燃燒發(fā)電來減少環(huán)境污染的同時(shí)致使很多歷史文物被淹沒以及造成很多人搬家。

“Mao Zedong once wrote a poem in which he dreams of...毛澤東曾經(jīng)寫過一首詩，他夢(mèng)想著...”中“in which he dreams of...”是定語從句，修飾“ poem”，因?yàn)橹骶涫沁^去時(shí)態(tài)，所以從句為過去時(shí)。故將dreams改為dreamed。

“walls of stone to hold clouds and rains tills a smooth lake rises in the narrow gorges”意思是截?cái)辔咨皆朴�，高峽出平湖。“hold”故將 hold 改為hold back。

“rain”雨，是不可數(shù)名詞。故將rains 改為rain。

“dreams have come true”夢(mèng)想已實(shí)現(xiàn)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，主動(dòng)表被動(dòng)。故將been去掉。

“Most of China's energy is produced by burning coal,that causes serious air pollution and increases global warming中國(guó)的大部分能源是煤炭燃燒產(chǎn)生的，這造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染，增加全球變暖”這句話的后半句是非限制性定語從句，從句的主語是整個(gè)主句部分，先行詞中只有which可以引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，且可以代指一個(gè)句子。故將that改為which。

“the dam will generate electricity equals to about 40 millions tons of coal without causing so many pollution大壩將產(chǎn)生相當(dāng)于約4000萬噸煤的電力，而不會(huì)造成很多污染”，前一句講煤炭燃燒發(fā)電會(huì)造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染，這一句講大壩發(fā)電不會(huì)造成很多污染，前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，不是因果關(guān)系。故將Therefore改為However。

“the dam will generate electricity equals to about 40 millions tons of coal without causing so many pollution”中“will generate”是謂語，“ equal to ”是介詞，相當(dāng)于。故將 equals改為equal 。

“without causing so many ”中“pollution”是不可數(shù)名詞，用much修飾，many修飾可數(shù)名詞。故將many改為much 。

“More than a million of people has moved form their homes一百多萬人搬家”一百萬人：a million people ，數(shù)百萬人： millions of people。當(dāng)“hundred、million、billion”前面有a或數(shù)字時(shí)，不加of，后面直接跟名詞，當(dāng)前面什么都沒有時(shí)，其后需加s 并與of 連用才能修飾名詞。故將of去掉。

“More than a million of people has moved form their homes”中主語是“More than a million of people一百多萬人”，所以謂語用復(fù)數(shù)，而非單三人稱。故將has改為have。