Question

進入高中以來，同學們倍感學習任務(wù)重，壓力大。許多同學爭分奪秒甚至連課間十分鐘的休息時間也花在學習上。針對這一現(xiàn)象，請以A Ten-minute Break為題，寫一篇詞數(shù)為100左右的短文，短文的內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點

1.十分鐘的課間休息是必要的

2.要注意休息的方式

3.我通常是怎樣利用這十分鐘的

  As students of Senior Middle school, we have to study from early morning till late evening.                                                                      

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As students of Senior Grade Three, we have to study from early morning till late evening. With great pressure, many of us grasp every minute to study, even a ten-minute break.

Therefore to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important and necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.

During the ten-minute break we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest instead of getting more tired

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercises, such as a free chat or a walk with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again

【解析】本文討論的內(nèi)容是學生非常熟悉的，具有很強的可寫性。文章的要點并不是很清晰，需要考生自己梳理，屬于半開放性的作文。在寫這篇文章時，一定要注意謀篇布局，列出自己要寫的要點，在第三點上可以做適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的句型如強調(diào)句型，倒裝句之類，讓文章更有檔次。