Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Nowadays, there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering．It’s well-known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return．It’s as the Spirit of Lei Feng．However, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend．For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers. They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics. Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them．Even though some people’s career is a volunteer．They are ready to helping others．Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society．

Answer 1

【答案】1. a→an 2. something→nothing 3. as→like 4. people后面加who 5. such→so 6. make→made 7. warm→warmth 8. though去掉 9. helping→help 10. they→them

【解析】1. 因?yàn)?/span>increasing是以元音音素開頭，表示“一”時(shí)，冠詞用an，故把a(bǔ)改成an。

2. 句意：志愿者就是不求社會(huì)的回報(bào)。故把something改成nothing。

3. 句意：它像雷鋒精神一樣。like“像……一樣”，故把a(bǔ)s改成like。

4. 因?yàn)槭切揎棻硎緮?shù)量的形容詞many，所以把such改成so。

5. 句意：他們?yōu)閵W運(yùn)會(huì)的成功做出了許多貢獻(xiàn)。根據(jù)句意可知用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把make改成made。

6. 此處people是先行詞，指人，在后面的定語從句中作主語，不可省略，故在people后面加who。

7. 句意：給老年人帶來溫暖。用名詞作賓語，故填warmth。

8. 句意：甚至一些人的事業(yè)就是一名志愿者。此處不是“即使”的意思，故把though去掉。

9. 固定搭配：be ready to do sth.“準(zhǔn)備做某事”，故把helping改成help。

10. 句意：感謝他們。此處用代詞的賓格作動(dòng)詞thank的賓語，故把they改成them。