假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitor standing in front of ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightening animals that I quickened their steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no lucky. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometers.

1.visitor改成visitors

2.ticket前加the

3.buy改成bought

4.too改成so

5.their改成my

6.look改成looking

7.lucky改成luck

8.alone改成lonely

9.Bad改成Worse

10.把home前的to去掉

【解析】

1.1】lots of 后跟可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，visitor改成visitors

2.2】此處特指賣票的窗口，所以ticket前加the

3.3】waited 和buy 是并列關(guān)系，buy也用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把buy改成bought

4.4】固定結(jié)構(gòu)so…that…如此---以至于---，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句，故把too改成so

5.5】句子的主語是I,根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是加快了我的步伐，所以把their改成my

6.6】固定搭配have a hard time（in）doing做某事很艱難。故把look改成looking

7.7】no后跟名詞，所以把lucky改成luck，句意：我沒運(yùn)氣。

8.8】alone單獨(dú)、獨(dú)自，lonely孤獨(dú)的、寂寞的。此處句意是我感到孤獨(dú)，所以把a(bǔ)lone改成lonely

9.9】固定搭配worse still更糟糕的是，所以把Bad改成Worse

10.10】home是副詞，前面不用加to，所以把home前的to去掉

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。

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