Question

某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語訓(xùn)練營，開設(shè)了以下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking），防身術(shù)（self-defense），護理（nursing ）。假設(shè)你是李華，寫封申請信，報名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。
內(nèi)容要點：1. 你感興趣的課程；2. 你期望從中學(xué)到什么；3.為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容
Dear sir /madam,
                                                                                         
                                                                                         
        
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear sir /madam,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English summer camp which contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-defense, nursing and so on.
I want to register  to attend a course about gardening because I have liked  flowers, grasses etc since  I was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. For one thing, I want to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. For another, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners and treasure plants much more consequently. What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.
Yours,
Li Hua

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【寫作指導(dǎo)】
本文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，要求寫一封申請信，報名參加一項課程。使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。要點：1. 你感興趣的課程：園藝；2.希這個課程讓我了解到更多與園藝有關(guān)的知識。3.為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容：期望園藝能夠幫助我在大學(xué)里的專業(yè)學(xué)的更好，而且未來自己也想從事于園藝有關(guān)的事業(yè)；
寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。
【一句多譯】
而且，畢業(yè)以后，我計劃把我的時間花在種植花草，讓我們的祖國更加漂亮吸引更多的人來參觀。
①[What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.
②What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state to attract more foreigners to come to visit it.