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【題目】假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(/\),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞:

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Shortly after when I moved to a new neighborhood, my African gray parrot accidentally fly out of the door. Panicked, I ran after him.One of the new word the parrot had learned recently was coffee, and her nickname was Small. As a result, I was running around yelled “Small! Coffee!” at the trees like a madwoman, hoping for him give a response. Finally, the neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand. She said, “Maybe you should relax. By the way, there has no coffee shop here, honey.” Fortunate, I got my parrot back later that day.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】Shortly after when I moved to a new neighborhood,此句為after 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，when 多余。

my African gray parrot accidentally fly out of the door.根據(jù)前后句可知此句時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，風(fēng)里語(yǔ)要改為flew。

One of the new word the parrot had learned recently was coffee,此句中one of 后要加名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以word 要變words。

and her nickname was Small.根據(jù)后文可知此處指代鸚鵡用his ，不用her。

I was running around yelled此句中有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞was running，因此yell 為非謂語(yǔ)用現(xiàn)在分詞yelling。

hoping for him give a response.此句為hope for sb to do，

the neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand.此句的鄰居是第一次提到應(yīng)該用a。

a neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand.此句杯子在手中用in，不用on。

there has no coffee shop here, honey.此句表示這兒沒(méi)有咖啡店，某處有。。。用there is no coffee shop。

Fortunate, I got my parrot back later that day.此句幸運(yùn)的是，我最終找回了我的鸚鵡。幸運(yùn)的修飾整句話應(yīng)該用副詞fortunately。