Question

15．假定你是李華，剛獲得全校英語演講比賽一等獎．請給你的外教Jack寫一封英語感謝信，要點如下：
1．表示感謝；
2．回顧Jack對你的幫助和指導；
3．寶貴經(jīng)驗．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest．（高分句型一）I really appreciate your guidance and great help．
Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest，I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help．（高分句型二）Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation，you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate．What's more，it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident，which played a vital role in winning the contest．（高分句型三）
Through the contest，I've realized that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end．
Many thanks again．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，剛獲得全校英語演講比賽一等獎．請給你的外教Jack寫一封英語感謝信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：表示感謝；回顧Jack對你的幫助和指導；寶貴經(jīng)驗． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：English Speech Contest英語演講比賽；Look back on回顧；Not only，（but）also 不僅，而且；What's more而且；
I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest．（高分句型一）
Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest，I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help．（高分句型二）
What's more，it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident，which played a vital role in winning the contest．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
      I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest．（高分句型一）I really appreciate your guidance and great help．
      Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest，I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help．（高分句型二）Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation，you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate．What's more，it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident，which played a vital role in winning the contest．（高分句型三）
      Through the contest，I've realized that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end．
      Many thanks again．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．