Question

11．假如你是陜西新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生王飛，你偶爾在網(wǎng)上瀏覽到下面一份某國外旅行社的英文電子廣告：他們正在為來陜游覽的美國青少年代表團招募學(xué)生業(yè)余導(dǎo)游．看完后，你覺得你非常符合條件，且有意參加．現(xiàn)請你用英文在線填寫電子申請表（其他欄目已填好，僅需填寫申請陳述部分）其英文廣告如下：

內(nèi)容要求如下：1．表達你對這份工作的渴望及申請的誠意．2．說明你符合廣告中提出的所有條件，并加以陳述．3．表示你非常希望申請成功，并盡全力做好工作．

Full Name	Wang Fei	Gender	Male	Age	18
Email Address		wangfei@xhseniorhighschool．com
Personal statement of application
I am a student in Grade Three from Xinhua Senior High School in ShaanxiProvince．

注意：
短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域，不得透露任何個人信息．
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）；不得照抄廣告原句．
3、內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫．
4、書寫須清晰、工整．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文（提綱式作文）．讓我們寫一篇申請業(yè)余導(dǎo)游的作文，這需要我們根據(jù)廣告的要求，表達自己符合條件，并愿意參加的意愿．由提示可知，寫作時需用第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．內(nèi)容要點包括：首先表達自己是合適的人選，然后給出理由，比如擅長英語口語，熟悉當(dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗和美食，知道當(dāng)?shù)孛麆俟袍E，有相關(guān)經(jīng)驗并能歌善舞．我們可以將本作文分為三部分，第一部分為對這份工作的渴望及申請的誠意，第二部分為符合條件情況，第三部分為非常希望申請成功，并盡全力做好工作．
重要短語和句型：
eager to do sth．渴望做某事
be familar with熟悉…
what's more此外
places of interest名勝古跡
Last but not least最后但同樣重要的是
I think I am the right person that you are looking for．
我認為我就是你們再找的那個人．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
期望收到你的回復(fù)．

解答 參考答案：
    I am a student in Grade Three from Xinhua Senior High School in Shaanxi Province．After reading your advertisemnet on line，I feel very happy and eager to take the job you've advertised．I think I am the right person that you are looking for．＜表達對這份工作的渴望及申請的誠意＞
    First of all，I'm good at oral Engilsh and able to communicate with American people very well．Secondly，I am a native of Shanxi and quite familar with the local custom as well as various kinds of shanxi snack foods．Thirdly，I have a good knowledge of many places of interest in Shanxi．What's more，I once worked as a part-time tour guide in a travel agency in Summer vocation．Last but not least，I have a gift for arts and I can not only sing well but also dance beautifully．＜符合條件情況＞
    All in all，I can fully meet the requirements you've made in the advertisement on line．I do hope to be chosen as an amateur tour guide．If you could offer me the job，I'd appreciate it very much and make all my efforts to do the work well．I'm look forward to your reply．＜非常希望申請成功，并盡全力做好工作＞

點評 提綱式作文不能遺漏要點，同時為了提高作文的檔次，我們要在保證要點完整的同時，進行合理又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮．審題時要審體裁、定人稱，定時態(tài)，然后緊扣主題，整理信息，最后選詞造句，進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．