Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（25分）

近年來(lái)，大城市的交通擁堵引發(fā)公眾抱怨和關(guān)心，它給居民的生活和工作帶來(lái)極大不便。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息以“Traffic Congestion”為題寫一篇英文報(bào)道。首句已給出，120字左右。

原因	措施	自己的看法
私家車增多 城市道路和街道窄，改善緩慢 公共交通體系管理不善，個(gè)別人不遵守交通規(guī)則	改善公交體系，行人遵守交規(guī)不闖紅燈	………

Traffic congestion has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in big cities. It has caused a lot of inconvenience to people’s life and work.

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                          

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Traffic Congestion

Traffic congestion has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in big cities. It has caused a lot of inconvenience to people’s life and work.

There are many causes for this problem. The first cause is the great increase in the number of private cars, blocking the way of other public transportation vehicles. The second cause is the slow and inefficient construction and improvement of the roads and streets. With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing, some roads still remain unimproved, which will surely lead to problems. The last cause is the insufficient management of the public traffic system and the people＇s lack of awareness of traffic regulations. To solve these , we should not only improve public traffic system but also help people with their safety awareness and not to cross the road when lights are still against them

In my opinion , only in this way can we have a comfortable road environment in cities.

【解析】

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考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

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