Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面有關(guān)中國(guó)在線外賣現(xiàn)狀調(diào)查的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

The scale of consumers of fast food delivery service in China

The fast food delivery service, which depends on the already-existing restaurants, can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants. Under the current economic and market condition, the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China. Even MacDonald’s and KFC, the two international fast food giants are fighting against each other for more market share in China’s fast food delivery industry.

However, Jing Linbo, Deputy Director of the Institute of Finance and Trade Economics, the Chinese Academy of Social Science, thought that the fast food delivery is the new growth point of fast food enterprises. But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths to do this service, which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some aspects.

Besides, with the development of the new industry, there also emerge problems. And some observers have given their warnings. They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of the hidden problems, they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.

（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 結(jié)合上述信息，簡(jiǎn)要分析外賣盛行的主要原因；

3. 請(qǐng)從消費(fèi)者角度談?wù)勀銓?duì)外賣的看法及建議，用2-3個(gè)理由支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】The fast food delivery service, new and emerging, is being chased by food business tycoons. Enormous potential as it holds to generate more revenues for fast food companies, this burgeoning industry carries with it several concealed challenges.

Behind the rise of the delivery service lie two major drivers, the first of which goes to the research and development of high-tech killer apps such as Meituan and Elema. By liaising closely with restaurants, consumers and riders, these apps enable customers to enjoy great delicacies with a simple click of the mouse. Another reason is our fast contemporary living pace. Why bother, some argue, to eat out when you can continue working at desk with your food on the way.

For the service to develop sustainably and virtuously, firstly, we need to ensure the safety of the riders, who constantly race against time and jump red lights. Thus, deliver compaines need to buy them life insurances and give them adequate security training. Moreover, since a sea of plastic waste would be produced by this industry, the restaurant might charge consumers extra money for the packages or encourage them to use bowls and chopsticks of their own when dining.

【解析】

第一段:

這篇材料屬于社會(huì)現(xiàn)象類，一點(diǎn)辦法都沒(méi)有，孩子們首先需要采用串線法，把每一段和圖表的大意概括出來(lái)，然后再把這些大意理清楚邏輯關(guān)系，串成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。

圖表信息:外賣行業(yè)欣欣向榮地發(fā)展:

第一段:外賣服務(wù)能夠使傳統(tǒng)餐館的業(yè)務(wù)得到拓展，所以導(dǎo)致很多餐飲巨頭爭(zhēng)奪外賣服務(wù)這塊肥肉。

第二段:外賣服務(wù)是快餐公司的新的增長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)，但是快餐公司需要有綜合實(shí)力才能夠把外賣服務(wù)做好。

第三段:外賣服務(wù)也有潛在的問(wèn)題，快餐公司需要注意這些潛在的問(wèn)題。

串線法串下來(lái)，30個(gè)字概括的中文版就有了:

外賣服務(wù)能夠使傳統(tǒng)餐館的業(yè)務(wù)得到拓展，所以導(dǎo)致很多餐飲巨頭爭(zhēng)奪外賣服務(wù)這塊肥肉。雖然外賣服務(wù)是快餐公司的新的增長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)，但是快餐公司需要有綜合實(shí)力才能夠把外賣服務(wù)做好。再次，外賣服務(wù)也有潛在的問(wèn)題，快餐公司需要注意這些潛在的問(wèn)題。

英文版本為:

The fast food delivery service, new and emerging, is being chased by food business tycoons. Enormous potential as it holds to generate more revenues for fast food companies, this burgeoning industry carries with it several concealed challenges.

注意:務(wù)必在首段注意好單詞的同意替換，不要照抄原文，比如chase替換掉了原文的the new battlefield. growth point被替換成了generate more revenue, hidden被替換了concealed, problem被替換成了challenges. 只要這樣，才能凸顯出你沒(méi)有照抄原文，你的詞匯量是豐富多彩的！

第二段:

外賣行業(yè)崛起的原因，首先我們要向內(nèi)看，即它本身是非常方便又快捷的，同時(shí)它借助手機(jī)app,精準(zhǔn)地連接了目標(biāo)客戶和餐館，把美味帶給了更多的家庭和個(gè)人，其次很多人足不出戶，手機(jī)上一點(diǎn)就可以坐等美食，正是因?yàn)檫@一點(diǎn)，導(dǎo)致了它的崛起。

向外看，即外賣行業(yè)處在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)時(shí)代，因?yàn)槊缊F(tuán)，餓了嗎這樣的app的研發(fā)，因?yàn)轵T手的招募，使得整個(gè)產(chǎn)業(yè)鏈得以運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。

于是英文版是:

Behind the rise of the delivery service lie two major drivers, the first of which goes to the research and development of high-tech killer apps such as Meituan and Elema. By liaising closely with restaurants, consumers and riders, these apps enable customers to enjoy great delicacies with a simple click of the mouse. Another reason is our fast contemporary living pace. Why bother, some argue, to eat out when you can continue working at desk with your food on the way.

第三段:

你對(duì)外賣的看法和建議，還是選擇向內(nèi)看，向外看的角度來(lái)產(chǎn)生觀點(diǎn)。首先，外賣行業(yè)依賴外賣小哥，他們風(fēng)里來(lái)雨里去，為了和時(shí)間賽跑而闖紅綠燈，而發(fā)生交通事故，所以我們應(yīng)該在保證他們安全的前提下，將食物安全送達(dá)。其次，相比堂吃，外賣產(chǎn)生的固體和塑料污染不可小覷，因此，我們可以對(duì)消費(fèi)者增收包裝盒錢(qián)，或者鼓勵(lì)他們使用自己的餐具，以喚醒他們的環(huán)保意識(shí)。

英文版是:

For the service to develop sustainably and virtuously, firstly, we need to ensure the safety of the riders, who constantly race against time and jump red lights. Thus, deliver compaines need to buy them life insurances and give them adequate security training. Moreover, since a sea of plastic waste would be produced by this industry, the restaurant might charge consumers extra money for the packages or encourage them to use bowls and chopsticks of their own when dining.