Question

假如你是李華，在一個英文網絡論壇上，你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發(fā)帖尋求幫助，請根據帖子內容和要求回帖。

問題:我今年14歲了，今年秋天就要去上高中了，但是我的媽媽還把我當做7歲小孩對待，我應該怎么辦呢？

參考詞匯：理【解析】
understand 建議：suggestion

寫作要點：

(1)告訴Grown-up要理解母親；

(2)給Grown-up解決問題的具體建議；

(3)可適當發(fā)揮，詞數100詞左右。

Hi, Grown-up,

Yours friendly,

Li hua.

Answer 1

Hi, Grown-up,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it’s good to talk more with your mother. Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better. There are also chances to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things.

Second, you should learn to do your own things well and let your mother know that you are already a “Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework with your mother, such as ,cleaning, washing, cooking and so on.

Best wishes!

Yours friendly,

Li hua.

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