Question

19．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
     There is no such thing as a free lunch．Success doesn't come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all．As they say，"As you sow，so shall you reap（收獲）．"
    注意事項：
1．無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示；
2．除詩歌外，文體不限；
3．不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱；
4．短文詞數(shù)不少于100．

Answer 1

分析 考查開放性作文．開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．這對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要有變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體．文章是要用一個具體的事例來說明"一分耕耘一分收獲"的道理，用第一人稱和一般過去時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
have a desire for 渴望
belong to屬于
make every effort to do努力做…
make the best of 充分利用
catch up with趕上
pay off成功，有回報，
As the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"
常言道："不勞無獲．"非限制性定語從句．
So discouraged was I that I didn't want to do anything．
我是如此灰心喪氣以致于什么都不想做了．so+形容詞置于句首，句子要部分倒裝句．
I didn't do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes．
我不做作業(yè)，甚至也不聽課． what引導賓語從句作attend to的賓語．
Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me．
直到那時我才意識到我錯了，成功不是等待．only加狀語提前，句子要部分倒裝句．

解答 參考范文：
Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people．As the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"（高分句型一）
I failed in the last exam．So discouraged was I that I didn't want to do anything．（高分句型二） I didn't do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes．（高分句型三） Later on，I found things got even worse．Meanwhile，a great many students made every effort to study．Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me．（高分句型四） So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates．Now I'm progressing in my studies．I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually．
My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy．One's efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is．

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．