Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living.One night I took a fare at 2:30 AM. When I arrived to collect, the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute.” answered a weak, elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor.

After a long pause, the door opened. A small woman in her 80’s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat, like somebody out of a 1940s movie. “Would you carry my bag out to the car?” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab, then returned to assist the woman.She held my arm and we walked slowly toward my car.

She kept thanking me for my kindness. “It’s nothing”, I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.”

“Oh, you’re such a good man,” she said. When we got in the car, she gave me an address, and then asked, “Could you drive through downtown?”

I looked in the rear-view mirror(后視鏡). Her eyes were shinning. “I don't have any family left,” she continued. “The doctor says I don’t have very long.” I quietly reached over and shut off the meter. “What route would you like me to take?” I asked.

For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked as an operator.We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Sometimes she’d ask me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing.

As the first ray of the sun appeared, she suddenly said, “I’m tired. Let’s go now.” We drove in silence to the address she had given me. It was a small hospice(臨終關(guān)懷醫(yī)院), with a driveway that passed under an entrance hall. Two nurses came out to the car as soon as we pulled up.

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1：

I opened the trunk and took the small suitcase to the door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2：

Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】I opened the trunk and took the small suitcase to the door. The woman was slowly seated in a wheelchair with the help of the nurses. “How much do I owe you?” she asked eagerly, reaching into her purse.“Nothing,” I said. “But you have to make a living,” she answered. “Oh, there are other passengers,” I responded. The old woman offered his heartfelt gratitude once again.

Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly, tears filling her eyes. Our hug ended with her remark, “You gave an old woman a little moment of joy.”After a slight pause, she added, “Thank you for your kindness.” I squeezed her hand, and then walked into the dim morning light. Saying goodbye to the poor lady, I drove aimlessly lost in thought. I don’t think that I have done anything more important in my life.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是讀后續(xù)寫。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者是一位出租車司機，某天深夜他載著一位80多歲的老人穿越市區(qū)，將老人送到了臨終關(guān)懷醫(yī)院。這次載客對他來講是很特殊的一次經(jīng)歷，他給與了老人最后的慰藉和關(guān)懷。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：我打開后備箱將老人的手提箱送到了門口，所以后面應(yīng)該寫老人下車之后如何感謝我，以及我主動拒絕老人的報酬�？梢跃唧w描寫我和老人之間的對話。第二段開頭是：我不假思索地躬身給老人一個擁抱。所以后面可以寫被我擁抱之后老人的情緒以及情感表達。以及后來我們分別的情景，分別之后我的心情。最后可以著重描寫我對這次不同尋常的載客的感受。

續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加以運用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。