Question

請閱讀下面的名言，并談?wù)勛约簩τ亚榈目捶ā?br />“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
談感想 結(jié)合自己一次經(jīng)歷 以此為題
要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括： 
2.詞數(shù)：120詞。

Answer 1

Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.
Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. No man can make the most of his life without friends as he goes along.
Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. Real friends can share all our sorrows and doubts all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. Then we should treat our friends with honesty.  We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.
In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to treasure it by means of words and deeds. Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.

試題分析：考查開放性作文。開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。
【亮點說明】Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. 這句話是用了省略句，With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. 這句話用了定語從句， Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.這句話用了定語從句， While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. 這句話用了省略句Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.這句話用了倒裝句。