Question

【題目】假定有一批外賓要在中國過春節(jié)，他們很想了解關(guān)于我國春節(jié)的一些情況，請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，以作介紹。字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

要點(diǎn)：(1) 春節(jié)就是中國的新年，一般在二月份。

(2) 中國的年份是按１２生肖命名的，如狗年、猴年等。今年是羊年。

(3) 春節(jié)前人們要大掃除，給孩子買新衣。大年夜家人在一起吃年夜飯。

(4) 年初一走訪親友。孩子們會得到壓歲錢。

(5) 人們在春節(jié)常常過得很愉快。

1.詞數(shù)100字左右

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

參考詞匯：羊年Year of the Goat 壓歲錢 lucky money

Spring Festival

The Chinese New Year is called Spring Festival，

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Answer 1

【答案】

Spring Festival

The Chinese New Year is called Spring Festival, it usually comes in February．There is a name for each year．It may be called Year of the dog or Year of the monkey．And this year is Year of the goat．

Before the Now Year’s Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a thorough cleaning．On the last day of the old year, there is a big family dinner．All members of the family try to be present at the meal．On the first day of the new year, people go to visit their relatives and friends．As a rule, children are given some money to buy things they like．

People often have a good time during the Festival．

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息來介紹中國國春節(jié)的具體情況。寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照時間順序經(jīng)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用過去時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Before the Now Year’s Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a thorough cleaning．是時間狀語從句。As a rule, children are given some money to buy things they like．是定語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語go to visit，at the meal，try to do，as a rule，have a good time等使文章更有亮點(diǎn)，也使語言更加連貫。