Question

【題目】 假如你是星光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，將參加主題為“My Chinese Dream”的英語演講比賽，請撰寫一篇演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1． 夢想成為一名山村教師，幫助山村孩子;

2． 山區(qū)偏僻，教育落后;

3． 父母和朋友都反對;

4． 我會(huì)......

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Good morning, everyone!

Thank You!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone!

I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “My

Chinese Dream”.

As we know, the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas. And the children there are longing for knowledge. Therefore, the problem about the lack of teachers is especially serious. It puzzles me that parents and friends aren’t in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher. And they think I am foolish. I understand their thoughts and feelings, but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me. I will study hard to go college, thus realizing my dream.

I won’t regret my choice. I will struggle for my dream. Come on and join me!

Thank You!

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是星光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，將參加主題為“My Chinese Dream”的英語演講比賽，請撰寫一篇演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.夢想成為一名山村教師，幫助山村孩子；2.山區(qū)偏僻，教育落后；父母和朋友都反對；我會(huì)......。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫.寫作時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。避免全部使用簡單句。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】As we know, the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas.as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句在句中體現(xiàn)；It puzzles me that parents and friends aren’t in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher.句中運(yùn)用了主語從句，其中it是形式主語；And they think I am foolish.句子雖短，但包含了一個(gè)賓語從句；I understand their thoughts and feelings, but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me.表示轉(zhuǎn)折的并列句，并且but后運(yùn)用了含賓語從句的復(fù)合句；I will study hard to go college, thus realizing my dream.現(xiàn)在分詞作自然的結(jié)果狀語，運(yùn)用巧妙；Come on and join me!最后使用了祈使句，使文章更顯魅力。