【題目】寒假中，你的父母以和你談起報(bào)考大學(xué)的事兒，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合他們的意見(jiàn)和自己的想法寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，投稿到某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)，和大家分享你的看法。要點(diǎn)如下：

1、選擇什么樣的大學(xué)或?qū)I(yè)？

2、選擇的理由？(兩點(diǎn))

3、最后一個(gè)學(xué)期的打算？

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)：不少于120詞；

2. 開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to share my ideas about my future college or major.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to share my ideas about my future college or major.

The time is getting closer and closer when I have to make a decision on what kind of college to go. Combining my parents’ advice with my opinion, I think it is a better choice to make foreign language as my major, such as English or German. The reason why I make such a choice is that I’m fond of foreign language very much. I always find foreign language an attraction to my curiosity. What’s more, mastering one or two foreign languages will provide me more chance to travel or learn abroad, which accordingly will broaden my mind.

Therefore, I think I have no choice but to fight for the last battle to realize my dream. I’m determined to meet the possible hardship and challenge in the last term and make it.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考官評(píng)卷首先會(huì)根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言判定作文所屬的檔次，然后從：內(nèi)容切題，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、多樣、連貫、得體，這幾個(gè)方面評(píng)定分?jǐn)?shù)。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時(shí)要盡量保持簡(jiǎn)潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作對(duì)于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫(xiě)作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】第二段第一句是一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句。The time is getting closer and closer when I have to make a decision on what kind of college to go.距離我必須做出上哪樣的大學(xué)的決定的時(shí)間越來(lái)越近。When引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)修飾time，what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句修飾decisioin on。第二句首先用了一個(gè)分詞做狀語(yǔ)：Combining my parents’ advice with my opinion,結(jié)合我父母的建議和我的想法；然后用了形式主語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu) it is。第三句使用了一個(gè)原因狀語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句。The reason why I make such a choice is that I’m fond of foreign language very much. 我這樣做決定是因?yàn)槲曳浅Ｏ矚g外語(yǔ)。I always find foreign language an attraction to my curiosity. 第五句mastering也是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，后半句是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which修飾前面整個(gè)句子。What’s more, mastering one or two foreign languages will provide me more chance to travel or learn abroad, which accordingly will broaden my mind.更重要的是，掌握一兩門(mén)外語(yǔ)將會(huì)給我提供更多出國(guó)旅行和學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)，這將相應(yīng)的開(kāi)闊我的內(nèi)心。文章除了大量的使用復(fù)雜句之外，還是用了一些比較好的短語(yǔ)和結(jié)構(gòu)。高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：am fond of 喜歡；find foreign language an attraction to my curiosity發(fā)現(xiàn)外語(yǔ)吸引著我的好奇心；What’s more,更重要的是；therefore因此，have no choice but to別無(wú)選擇，只能…。這些好的短語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)都為文章增色不少。

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