Question

有些高中生有時(shí)與同學(xué)發(fā)生這樣或那樣的矛盾或沖突，這些問(wèn)題會(huì)給大家?guī)��?lái)煩惱甚至影響大家的學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文，分析一下產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因，并談?wù)剳?yīng)如何正確地與同學(xué)相處。（關(guān)鍵詞：classmate conflicts）

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Answer 1

Classmate conflicts among senior middle school students are often heard on campus over recent years. These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning.

Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tidy things such as space to store books and notes. Different students have different personalities, which can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. Besides, the fact that students have different attitudes towards certain issue is another factor causing these conflicts.

Classmate conflicts are harmful and needed to be settled. Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts, I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a  more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. Meanwhile , communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts  result from misunderstanding.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，討論如何和同學(xué)相處，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文主旨明確，語(yǔ)句通順，句式多變：如：These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning. 這句話里面有make+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)，Different students have different personalities, which can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. 這句話里面有定語(yǔ)從句， the fact that students have different attitudes towards certain issue is another factor causing these conflicts.這句話里面有同位語(yǔ)從句， Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts, I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a  more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. 這句話有讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句，原因狀語(yǔ)從句， communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts  result from misunderstanding. 這句話里面用since連接原因狀語(yǔ)從句，還有文中使用Besides, Meanwhile ,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加通順。

考點(diǎn)：考查開放式作文