Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使其構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

The meeting had come to an end. Bob started to stand up, spilling his coffee over his notes. 'How embarrassing. I am getting so clumsy in my old age.' Everyone had a good laugh, and soon we were all telling stories of our most embarrassing moments. Someone said, 'Come on, Frank. Tell us your most embarrassing moment.'

'My embarrassing moment? ' I said and began to fall into the memory of the past, 'Honestly, it is the most regretful one for me in my life.'

I grew up in San Pedro. My Dad was a fisherman, and he loved the sea. He had his own boat, but it was hard making a living on the sea. He worked hard and would stay out until he caught enough to feed the family.

I wish you could have met my Dad. He was a big man, and he was strong from pulling the nets and fighting the seas for his catch. When you got close to him, he smelled like the ocean. He would wear his old canvas, foul-weather coat and his bibbed overalls. His rain hat would be pulled down over his brow. No matter how much my Mother washed them, they would still smell of the sea and of fish.

When the weather was bad he would drive me to school. He had this old truck that he used in his fishing business. That truck was older than he was. As he would drive toward the school, I would shrink down into the seat hoping to disappear. Half the time, he would slam to a stop and the old truck would belch a cloud of smoke. He would pull right up in front, and it seemed like everybody would be standing around and watching. Then he would lean over, give me a big kiss on the cheek. It was so embarrassing for me. I was twelve years old, and my Dad would lean over and kiss me goodbye.

注意：續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。

第一段：Then one day when we got to the school with his usual big smile, he started to lean toward me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第二段：Tears began to well up in Frank’s eyes, as he spoke. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Then one day when we got to the school with his usual big smile, he started to lean toward me. But I put my hand up and said, 'No, Dad. ' It was the first time I had never talked to him that way, and he had this surprised look on his face. I said, 'Dad, I am too old for a good-bye kiss. I am too old for any kind of kiss. ' My Dad looked at me for the longest time, and his eyes started to tear. I had never seen him cry. He turned. 'You are right, ' he said. 'You are a big boy…a man. I will not kiss you anymore. '

Tears began to well up in Frank's eyes, as he spoke. 'It wasn't long after that when my Dad went to sea and never came back. ' I looked at Frank and saw that tears were running down his cheeks. Frank spoke again. 'Guys, you don't know what I would give to have my Dad give me just one more kiss on the cheek. '

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。文章主要講述了作者小時(shí)候發(fā)生的一件令人尷尬而又后悔的事情。

續(xù)寫(xiě)分為兩段。第一段的開(kāi)頭是：有一天我們到學(xué)校時(shí)，他臉上帶著和往常一樣的笑容，然后朝我靠過(guò)來(lái)。所以后面可以接著寫(xiě)作者父親向他靠過(guò)來(lái)時(shí)發(fā)生的一件當(dāng)時(shí)讓人尷尬，后來(lái)讓作者后悔的事情。例如：我用手擋住父親，示意他不要親吻我。這也是我第一次用這種方式對(duì)待父親。他很驚訝，我接著說(shuō)：“我已經(jīng)足夠大，不需要吻別了；我已經(jīng)足夠大，不需要任何形式的親吻。”父親停頓了一會(huì)，說(shuō)：“是的，你已經(jīng)是個(gè)男子漢了，已經(jīng)不需要親吻了。我以后再也不會(huì)這么做了�！�

第二段的開(kāi)頭是：弗蘭克說(shuō)著，眼里出現(xiàn)了淚水。所以可以接著寫(xiě)讓弗蘭克感到后悔的事情。例如：弗蘭克接著說(shuō)：“沒(méi)過(guò)多久，我的父親出海再也沒(méi)有回來(lái)了�！彼�停頓了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，然后說(shuō)：“伙計(jì)們，你們知道嗎？我愿意用任何東西換父親的再一次親吻。”