Question

假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席（Chair of the Student Union）李華。你校將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來(lái)做評(píng)委。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫(xiě)一封信。

英語(yǔ)演講比賽 主題：人與自然 時(shí)間：6月15日下午2：00－5：00 地點(diǎn)：501教室 參賽選手：10名學(xué)生 聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655） 歡迎大家光臨

         注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

         Dear Ms. Smith,

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                     With best wishes,

                                                                          Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Ms Smith,

         I’m Li Hua. Chair  of  the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which  is close to your University. I’m writing to invite you  to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1^st.  It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches  on  the  given  topic “Man and  the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation  if  it  is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560. if you have any questions.

         I am looking forward to your reply.

                                                                 With best wishes,

                                                                          Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求讓你給評(píng)委寫(xiě)信，因此本文必須用第一人稱(chēng)。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。本信涉及的生詞不多，根據(jù)線索和信函要求，學(xué)生容易組織材料。適當(dāng)?shù)难诱箓�(gè)別細(xì)節(jié)再加上所給的提示，考生注意寫(xiě)清楚以下幾點(diǎn)：1.主題，2. 時(shí)間，3. 地點(diǎn)，4. 參賽選手，5. 恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，就能較好的發(fā)揮出來(lái)。當(dāng)然在書(shū)寫(xiě)上，要干凈整潔的卷面與字?jǐn)?shù)要求，一般能達(dá)到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如writing to，invite you  to，last for, deliver their speeches，accept our invitation，looking forward to；還運(yùn)用了Chair  of  the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which  is close to your University. which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句; We hope you will accept our invitation  if  it  is convenient for you. if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；Please call me at 446765560.引用了祈使句等等。

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