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近年來(lái)，汽車產(chǎn)業(yè)的飛速發(fā)展，汽車購(gòu)買量猛增已給我們的生活和環(huán)境造成了極大的影響甚至困擾。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，題目自擬。

1. 描述目前的交通狀況；

2. 人們大量使用汽車所產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題；

3. 你的建議或解決辦法（至少兩條）。

要求：

1. 文章要包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右。

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Answer 1

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One Possible Version

How to Solve Traffic Jam

In the past years, with the rapid development of car industry, more and more cars have been produced. Many citizens are willing to buy their own cars to enjoy a better life.

It looks good but parking and driving have become a terrible problem. What’s worse it has caused lots of pollution and even contributed to smog. How to solve this problem remains puzzling. My suggestions are as follows.

Firstly, if possible, we can widen streets by changing two-lane streets into four-lane ones and four-lane ones into six-lane ones. Secondly, build more underground parking areas, which can reduce the number of cars on the street. Thirdly, some traffic vehicles, such as motors and trucks should be forbidden to enter the center of the city. Finally, the citizens should be encouraged to get to or from work or go shopping by bus. If we only follow these suggestions, we can lighten the traffic pressure and avoid traffic jam.

【解析】

試題分析：近年來(lái)，汽車產(chǎn)業(yè)的飛速發(fā)展，汽車購(gòu)買量猛增已給我們的生活和環(huán)境造成了極大的影響甚至困擾。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，題目自擬。1.描述目前的交通狀況；2.人們大量使用汽車所產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題；你的建議或解決辦法（至少兩條）。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】What’s worse it has caused lots of pollution and even contributed to smog.運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句；Secondly, build more underground parking areas, which can reduce the number of cars on the street. 運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句；Thirdly, some traffic vehicles, such as motors and trucks should be forbidden to enter the center of the city. 運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；If we only follow these suggestions, we can lighten the traffic pressure and avoid traffic jam.

運(yùn)用if引導(dǎo)的條件句；In the past years, with the rapid development of car industry, more and more cars have been produced. Many citizens are willing to buy their own cars to enjoy a better life.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。